Тема Health is better than wealth

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Сочинение по теме Health is better than wealth

I suppose no one could deny this fact. Health is the thing that determines our whole life and it is out of the question that without a good health no money and wealth in the world would make us happy. So I can’t really understand people, who forget to care about themselves and their health in the constant race for career growth and money. In the modern world stress is almost always present in people’s lives. It has been scientifically proved that stress has an enormous impact on our health and to reduce it is one of the vitally important steps to a healthy and happy life. But when career is the most important thing for us it is difficult to stay away from stress and tension. So sometimes we have to make a hard choice between health and career achievements. But I think that with some effort a balance can be found.
Another point I’d like to make is that we begin to praise health only when it leaves us. You must have noticed that young people avoid taking care of their health, as they think it is a waste of time, because it doesn’t trouble them. Meanwhile elderly people fuss about that all the time, since they have got countless illnesses, which should have been cured earlier. The fact illustrates one of the saddest truths of life: we don’t praise and preserve what we’ve got. I am convinced that we all should care about ourselves, no matter whether we are young or old, healthy or ill.
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